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Post by Kamiri (Ianthe) on Sept 13, 2005 8:13:28 GMT -5
Ok, so here's one of my character in the RPG - Ianthe Ozella. I just wanted to ask you guys if you think it would be better to finish it off in colour or just in black and white. I think black and white would turn out better though cos my pencils don't blend all that well...  This is an example of one of my greylead pieces that I did a while ago:  Tell me what you think!! |
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Post by Boromir on Sept 14, 2005 15:10:30 GMT -5
Not bad, not bad at all. I would work on the face on the second picture, mainly the mouth and head shape. The mouth seems...strange...and the face is a little stretched. (although that might be because of your scanner). Otherwise, I like them. I really like the clothing you used on your second drawing.
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Post by Kamiri (Ianthe) on Sept 14, 2005 17:38:42 GMT -5
Ok, thanks.
I don't have a scanner, so I had to use the digital camera, so the image isn't really flat... But it does look a bit distorted... I'm just worried that if I try to change nything, I'll just wreck it..
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Post by hobbit4life on Sept 15, 2005 19:57:04 GMT -5
Your artwork is very well done.  I love the detail in the clothing on the second picture. It looks like it took hours of work.  |
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Post by Kamiri (Ianthe) on Sept 15, 2005 22:56:58 GMT -5
Ha! Thanks.
Actually, I drew the outline during a lunchtime (40 minutes) Then I did the detail in bits and pieces over the rest of the afternoon.
The first picture isn't finished yet... I just wanted someone to tell me if I should finish it off in colour or in black and white like the second one. It's already a bit different to the one here...
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Post by Shade on Sept 16, 2005 18:03:23 GMT -5
I think black and white. If you do the shading right, the picture will turn out great.
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Post by Kamiri (Ianthe) on Sept 17, 2005 4:34:10 GMT -5
Cool. Thanks Shade!!
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Post by Kamiri (Ianthe) on Sept 23, 2005 23:40:31 GMT -5
Ok, so here's my semi-finished version of the first picture:  I'm still no sure what to put in the background, or even if there will be anything in the background. I have also decided I am going to do a series of character pics for a story idea I'm working on. No details are set yet though |
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Post by elerrina on Oct 1, 2005 17:40:22 GMT -5
I like it! All of them are better than anything I could have done! I don't really have an eye for artwork, so I shouldn't give much critique, but I do love the style of it all. As for whether or not you should add color, it depends on what you plan to color it with, and the quality of the color pencils or whatever. Good work, Kamiri!
~Rina
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Post by Kamiri (Ianthe) on Oct 1, 2005 22:40:06 GMT -5
Thanks. I don't think I'll add colour... It'll probably wreck it
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Post by Calenfalathiel on Oct 2, 2005 10:27:48 GMT -5
wow those are really great! i wish i could draw characters....I really like the improvement, and I agree, I think it's nicer without color and just the black and white....keep up the good work!
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Post by Kamiri (Ianthe) on Oct 19, 2005 3:51:27 GMT -5
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I love the detail in the clothing on the second picture. It looks like it took hours of work. 
Thank you ~Twippo ^
