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Post by Sakudra Ihbait Siato on Aug 18, 2004 14:09:00 GMT -5
Dedicated to my roleplay character, a true warrior and war god to the end-Sakudra Ihbait Siato.
'The Life of a war god is never long, or easy, danger is everywhere we live on the edge' - one of many peices of wisdom from Mithras.
Chapter 1-Training. 'He will come with the potential to be more powerful then his master, but with no focus. But never will the one who wields all the elements fall until he becomes too weak to resist his dark side' The Prophecy of the Gods written as old by Tialt the first ever War God.
"What happened to your focus?" Sakudra asked speaking to his young apprentice, Stormfriend.
"Sorry sir, I lost it I guess," Stormfriend replied, his voice meek.
Sakudra shook his head. Although Stormfriend was only 15 streaks of white were already starting to show in his dark hair. Sakudras hair was also starting to look rather white, he kept his hair short as in battle if he didn't then it was often cut for him by a sword.
Yea just the start. I need to write some more. Its set in another galaxy, the planet that its starting on is one called Godshome and it is the home of all the Gods. Sakudra is a war god. I were tempted to use my favourite pun of a long long time ago in a galaxy far away. I got the idea of putting a clip from the prophecy surrounding Sakdura from WOT books.
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Post by Boromir on Aug 18, 2004 14:36:44 GMT -5
good start ;D
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Post by Sakudra Ihbait Siato on Aug 19, 2004 4:49:24 GMT -5
Well here's some more. So far I've only done 2 A4 pages worth, started it I don't know how long back.
"Shall we go through that exercise again then?" Sakudra asked, his dark eyes glinting.
"Aye, ready when ever you are" Stormfriend replied with a slight smile.
For the purposes of practise Sakudra and his apprentice were only using wooden swords, same weight as a normal sword though. That didn't mean to say that if you got whacked by one it didn't hurt, it just didn't open a wound.
Sakudra went down into a low slashing attack, Stormfriend blocked it swiftly following into a counter attack. Sakudra ducked underneath, dropping to one knee, trying to get his practise sword underneath Stormfriends guard. Stormfriend leapt back, avoiding Sakudras practise sword.
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Post by Calenfalathiel on Aug 19, 2004 9:31:56 GMT -5
cool, I like the story so far! I'm looking forward to reading more of it...
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Post by Sakudra Ihbait Siato on Aug 21, 2004 16:07:35 GMT -5
I need to write some more now. Only got as far as that. I'll post more when I have written more.
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Post by Calenfalathiel on Aug 21, 2004 19:18:26 GMT -5
alrighty! *waits patiently*
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Post by Sakudra Ihbait Siato on Sept 29, 2004 11:45:06 GMT -5
Okay for now this story is on hold till I have finished my major story.
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Post by Minya Collowen on Sept 29, 2004 18:38:12 GMT -5
would you like for me to lock further posts? or do you prefer to keep it as is?
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Post by Sakudra Ihbait Siato on Sept 30, 2004 13:12:43 GMT -5
Yea please.
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Post by Minya Collowen on Sept 30, 2004 20:13:57 GMT -5
hmmm...yes to which?
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Post by Sakudra Ihbait Siato on Oct 27, 2004 15:32:40 GMT -5
Locked for now, o great one.
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