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Post by BloodLustD on Dec 14, 2003 21:45:15 GMT -5
My poems are my thread... therefore i will not post my poems in gondor AND SOMEONE ELSE PLZ RESPOND IT MAKES ME FEEL MORE SAD.... Oh and the poems are on the first page  |
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Post by Halloween on Dec 15, 2003 23:10:28 GMT -5
some times, pal, you worry me, but i like the second one
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Post by BloodLustD on Dec 15, 2003 23:17:18 GMT -5
yay painfulness in salvation yay yay (very read da vinci code those things they tighten around their leg with spikes going inward to cause pain because they want to be free of evil are cool)
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Post by Halloween on Dec 15, 2003 23:18:34 GMT -5
good book (read it before you though!)
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Post by BloodLustD on Dec 16, 2003 0:06:20 GMT -5
Wow this thread is on fire but it only has two people viewing it...EVER
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Post by BloodLustD on Dec 16, 2003 17:21:44 GMT -5
I try to do my best for you Hall on account of no one ever will see these poems...  AND PEOPLE KEEP STEALING MY WORK DARN THEM TO HECK!!! Every time i post something on a popular website for poems i see em on other ones too but i did not post em!! |
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Post by BloodLustD on Dec 16, 2003 17:28:45 GMT -5
I got one in me for today
Fall from the light, Rise from the shadow
My tears see no end
Madness is just around the bend
Screaming with the fury I run and close my door
In my room I stay, I fall on the floor
There is nothing else to do, this pain will not cease
I shall never, in this feeted world, find peace
So I wrap my hands around the shining blade
As my sorrow explodes like a grenade
A blizzard of hate tears up my once compassionate soul
Giving up to the darkness, banishing the hope, is now my goal
The fury in my eyes could cut through the thickest walls
And my mind is full of empty halls
The blade slides through my flesh with ease
The dark gods I do appease
Thrown past life not afraid
My irrelevant life I throw to the flames, to become powerful my soul I paid
The blood runs down my arm, and onto the floor
The pentagram is in the making, my pain shall soon be…. no more
I grow weary but the ritual must go on
For if I sleep the eternal sleep, I shall never see the light of dawn
It is complete, the chanting begins
The light leeched out of me, the darkness wins
The hellfire has been ignited in the farthest reaches of my soul
and my heart is as black as coal
The Daemon feasts upon me as it shapes me to its delight
As it fuses with me, I feel its awesome might
Black wings burst through my back and spread
Blood oozing from my cuts, you would think I was dead
Veins burst and blood flows
Down the drain my mortal life goes
Roaring with anger, the transformation is almost complete
My new life I do greet
I have become a soulless carrier of the shadow
And my new life has dawned
A slayer of worlds, and a nullifier of souls
For just that, my life I have pawned……
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Post by BloodLustD on Dec 18, 2003 23:54:48 GMT -5
I am now very very said nothing is going well
everything has gone to ducking hell
And nothing more can be won
My life is done
No more pain no more suffering
and all this is gone
No more life just death
and all this will be gone
No more nothing no more anything
nothing nothing nothing
The blood flows slowly
and it runs coldly
The darkness
the Darkness
The fire no more
and the what light was left is gone
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Post by Halloween on Dec 19, 2003 0:00:55 GMT -5
good rhyme...freak  |
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Post by Lazarus88 on Dec 23, 2003 19:24:44 GMT -5
I hope u guys don't mind a third visitor. I'm very much sad b/c there are only 3 WOT fans on the site! Anyway BloodLust, I'd be glad to review your poems.  |
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Post by BloodLustD on Dec 26, 2003 1:24:25 GMT -5
Yay critisim from laz!
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Post by Lady Elessar on Dec 26, 2003 9:59:06 GMT -5
poems are very pretty...post soem in rivendell  |
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Post by Lady Elessar on Dec 26, 2003 9:59:32 GMT -5
did i just say pretty?...dear god...
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Post by BloodLustD on Dec 26, 2003 10:44:37 GMT -5
Heh my poems pretty thats a riot... did you read all of them?
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Post by Lady Elessar on Dec 26, 2003 11:49:37 GMT -5
yeppy doody  |
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AND PEOPLE KEEP STEALING MY WORK DARN THEM TO HECK!!! Every time i post something on a popular website for poems i see em on other ones too but i did not post em!!
