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Post by BloodLustD on Dec 13, 2003 23:45:50 GMT -5
This is my dark ness unfolded in poem form First off i would like to start with an old favorite of mine writen last year in a phase of dispare (which i am still in though i hide it well)
It is a night of dark desire, a song of ethereal pain,
wolves vent their loneliness. The immortal one
awakes.
Fog shrouds her deathly form,
a timeless fear.
Her raven hair cascades over
pale and delicate shoulders, and her
full blood red lips part slightly, to taste the
blood streaming from the pale flesh beneath
her.
Now a might of darkness,
I rise.
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Post by BloodLustD on Dec 13, 2003 23:50:23 GMT -5
Here is another one i hope you like....
The Banshee
Her bare feet make no sound on the Frozen ground.
Her skin , like silk ,is whiter than the snow that has covered the forest in a veil of mystery...
A long,white cloak covers her thin body.
Her beautiful face is half-hidden by a hood.
Her big,pitch-black eyes mirror the pain
she forever carries deep within her thoughts.
But her thoughts shed never tell...
Foe reasons eternaly unknown ,she is forever weaping.
Never has she spoken a word...
For her eternity,beyond knowledge,myth and ledgend,
she wanders mournfully within the dark forests of Ireland.
She is searching...
Always looking...
Always looking for the one.
Suddenly,she turns her beautiful face upwards.
She closes her sad eyes.
Her thin pale lips part and from them a petrifing scream uncoils.
Such a sad scream...
Her scream ripped through the delicate silence of that night like a knife
It hovered in the freezing winter air. Lost and sad.
This,is a scream of a soul sunken in the darkest depths of despair
Her scream travells through the night
searching for the one...
The one who is to die...
All heads bow in prayer when the air rings with the echo of her frightfull voice...
She is searching...
Always looking for the one to die...
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Post by BloodLustD on Dec 14, 2003 0:18:36 GMT -5
I'm looking for people to post opinions on form ect. and i send lots of these poems to people and they spread a lot and NO ONE GIVES ME CREDIT CURSE THEM ALL
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Post by Halloween on Dec 14, 2003 0:19:19 GMT -5
quite good, my dear fellow. liked banshee muchmuch
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Post by BloodLustD on Dec 14, 2003 0:23:41 GMT -5
yay good reviews are good
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Post by BloodLustD on Dec 14, 2003 0:31:45 GMT -5
i got one more for tonight then i'll give you guys some tomorrow.
Bleed
Blood Runing slowly down
the earth beneath slowly abosrbs
The shine of metal
The searing pain
watch it all go down the Drain
Twist, shift, Flow
Blood Runing slowly down
the skin turns white
as the pale moon
Life slowly Drained
Last thoughts fleeting
My Heart slowly beating
Blood Running Slowly Down
It cannot stop
the pain slowly dies
and my vision does too
The Pain of the impact
The pain of the Pierce
the pain of the man behind the wheel
No longer can i feel
Blood no longer running...
everything slowed down
the dark is all that I can see
and now The blood is no longer
In me....
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Post by Halloween on Dec 14, 2003 0:33:36 GMT -5
nicenice!! rhyme......ooh......pretty......
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Post by BloodLustD on Dec 14, 2003 1:27:04 GMT -5
YAY MORE COMMENTS But from the same person....how come no one loves me  |
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Post by BloodLustD on Dec 14, 2003 2:14:23 GMT -5
Hmm i feel extra sad so i'll give you people one more but only one and then you actually have to read this plz
I Infect Your Soul
My darkness fades from view
And enters deep into you
I infect your soul
Let my darkness swallow you whole
You are part of my dreams
I am the precursor to your screams
I engulf your spirit
And take you to the limit
Taking you over the edge
Leaving you dangling on the ledge
To jump and die
Go on, pretend you can fly
Let me watch you fall to the ground
I will watch with joy unbound
Let me take away your life
Let me hand you this sharpened knife
End it all
And beware the fall
Deep down into my dark black hole
I am the keeper of your poor lost soul
Come join with me
Embrace me
Clutch me to your breast
Let my dark magic do the rest
We are the terrors that fly in the night
There is no point in putting up a fight
Let us entwine
Your wretched soul is mine
Let us again embrace
And leave behind this d**ned human race
Your body is nothing but an empty shell
Your soul belongs with me in Hell
I infect your soul
Let my darkness swallow you whole
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Post by Halloween on Dec 14, 2003 2:16:54 GMT -5
great rhymin, like it very much. no wat means
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Post by BloodLustD on Dec 14, 2003 2:21:03 GMT -5
WHY IS IT ALWAYS YOU HAL!! SOMEONE PLZ POST
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Post by Halloween on Dec 14, 2003 2:26:22 GMT -5
WHAT?  ?? am i not GOOD enough for you?!?!? IS THAT IT?!?!? |
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Post by BloodLustD on Dec 14, 2003 13:13:24 GMT -5
No no your good...but there is only one of you Boo hoo
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Post by BloodLustD on Dec 14, 2003 13:43:55 GMT -5
This is my poem for today (sunday)  Sweet sorrow Drowning in misery I can still see you Call out to me The life i once lead is gone and every one i loved is dead No one understands The vast emptyness The barren lands Nothing there to comfort The dark skys envelope And my mind starts to develop evil thoughts Nothing Nothing Nothing everywhere my mind in despair escaping is breathing Panting and heaving Stuck in this world of deseption |
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Post by Halloween on Dec 14, 2003 21:43:42 GMT -5
nice. hey, we can start poetry threads in gondor too! just ask me in the tower. gotta fill our kingdom, u know!
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?? am i not GOOD enough for you?!?!? IS THAT IT?!?!?